E-mail is an online correspondence system. With e-mail you can send and receive instant electronic messages, which works like writing letters. Your messages are delivered instantly to people anywhere in the world, unlike traditional mail that takes a lot of time. Email is now an essential communication tools in business. It is also excellent for keeping in touch with family and friends. The advantages to email is that it is free ( no charge per use) when compared to telephone, fax and postal services.
Before embarking on college many young people are advised that a year working or travelling may be a good option. This essay will suggest that saving money is the biggest advantage of this and a reduced motivation to study is the primary disadvantage.
Thanks for your reply and it really got a load of my mind! I am really glad that you made lessons for this question!! After reading your sample essay, I realized that my original response to the question(took a two-sided approach but just mentioned the advantages and disadvantages of teenagers doing unpaid work) was not a wise choice! And that was why it severely affected my Task Response score. In fact, I think this question is somewhat harder than other ‘normal’ Task 2 question, coz I think it would be more difficult to write a two-sided essay(one para talking about why it benefits teenagers and society, one para talking about why it doesn’t benefit…), especially when trying to answer ‘why I partly agree’.
When you have this type of advantage disadvantage essay it is important to distinguish between this and one that asks you to discuss advantages and disadvantages but does not ask your opinion.
Advantage / Disadvantage Essay Tips
I would need to ask you a question about Task2 (argumentation topic). The topic question is: 'What are the advantages and disadvantages of advertisement?' However, this question does not ask a personal opinion. My question is: will I be lower the mark if I put my opinion in the first paragraph of my essay?
Now take a look at the advantage disadvantage essay model answer.
If you are moving abroad to a new country for higher studies, you always tend to look for an English speaking country, less you are equally fluent in reading, writing, and speaking the other language like German, Cantonese, French or Russian. World’s major countries like United States of America, Russia, United Kingdom, Australia, Canada, and New Zealand are all English speaking countries, ergo moving to these countries for the purpose of work or relocating is relatively easier for a person who comes from an English moving country.
There are hardly any disadvantages that I can think of, considering English as a global language, barring just one that you get so engrossed in learning and communicating in English language that you lose touch with your own language and roots. Language is an integral part of the culture and it is what links you to it and it is what you pass on to your future generation.
Such illegal activities are frustrating for all Internet users, and so instead of just ignoring it, we should make an effort to try and stop these activities so that using the Internet can become that much safer. That said, the advantages of the Internet far outweigh the disadvantages, and millions of people each day benefit from using the Internet for work and for pleasure.